How to Edit a Speech: Remove One Precious Jewel

I learned something about editing speeches from Coco Channel, of all people. She used to say: After getting dressed, remove one piece of jewelry.

I use this technique with speeches: After planning a speech, I'll remove one precious element I had wanted to include: a fact or a quote or even a signature story.

Figuring out what to remove helps me decide what's essential. It also creates room - for dramatic pauses, for repetition, for digressions, and for spontaneous interactions with the audience. It helps me not feel rushed.

Speaking coach Ron Arden talks about the importance of transitional material: "the stuff in between."

This is the stuff that gets left out altogether. It's like white space. We're all eager to share so many pearls of wisdom, but I find that it's best to leave some of my favorite jewels at home.


Mariah Burton Nelson
http://www.MariahBurtonNelson.com

As an award-winning author, journalist, and speaker, Mariah Burton Nelson now helps organizations clarify and communicate their core messages in creative, compelling, and effective ways.